Thursday, October 19, 2006

(mike-u)


anticipation
is filling my soul today
myriad joys threaten
to break


PB

6 comments:

Steph said...

why?

eets said...

a comment response in Haiku:

uncomprehending
sitting in perplexity
whyever is it?

translation....what are you anticipating?

p.s. - you made me google the structure of a Haiku. Here it is if you're curious:

Structure:
* 3 Lines
* Lines 1,2,3 have 5,7,5 syllables respectively.
* Unrhymed

Peaby said...

hmmm...autumn leaves, harvest parties, REI gear sales, photoshoots, camping, snowcamping, skiing, job opportunities, Christmas, nephews walking and talking, skiing, rainy day golfing, marathon training, racquetball tournaments, skiing, eating pizza, to name a few. Lots of good things to look forward to in my future.

And if you're saying, "But, Mike! Haiku is 5,7,5!" I would say to you...that's why this is "Mike-u" ...not Haiku.

Steph said...

So, no skiing then this year.

Brazenlilly said...

Mike-u. Brilliant. I love that you are such a positive person. I recently heard that almost 90% of conversations are negative. Thanks for upping the 10%.

Anonymous said...

Hey Mike, it's Dustin Peters. I haven't talked to you in a while and I am definetly not familiar with these blog things. You can e-mail me at "dj-peters@comcast.net"
I'm sure this info. is out there for others to see, but I can always change my e-mail if it is misused by others. Take care old buddy, and God Bless.